All Comments on 'Gumdrop Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Omg

My first time commenting here. I know this just came out today but my word it is amazing and I need more please and thank you. I write for wattpad (rated g haha) and with thousands of reads people really get impatient for new parts, so obviously take your time. Thank you for this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I've enjoyed the story but I'm pretty put out with all of the Moooooooooing. Wish she had her voice. What lonely existence - no communication even with the other cows. Puts a damper on the story for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I go not conform with this last comment

I think the moooo Needs to be, in the further story can be read, that the "Cows" can communicate that way with each other. Of course the "Mooo-Device" is SiFi but never the less this story is fiction at all. So keep reading, there is a lt to discover and worth to read - enjoy like I did. JtL

bushyTrailbushyTrailover 4 years agoAuthor

For the user who did not like the mooing:

what you feel is exactly what I wanted the reader to feel at this stage of the story, which is, in part, about just that. As the kind reader who commented right after, stick around, your concerns are going to be addressed in a way that I hope will satisfy you. Thank you all for the comments, by the way!

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