All Comments on 'Gym Buddies with Benefits'

by Ravenmiller

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Awesome story

I love your story I was in the same situation you are in but I’m the man that was being neglected and I found what you found with a woman that was 10 years older than me and it was a awesome adventure I look forward to your next story please let me know what it will be my email isjlh220@icloud.com thanks again

oldsage_1oldsage_1almost 4 years ago
OMG!

Raven, you are evil! Love your style, writing and fantasies. Not sure this was better than the first chapter of 'The Cougar and the Anaconda' but you were right it was hot!

Really enjoyed both. As soon as my breathing returns to normal I will dive into more of your evil imaginations!

Keep that talented brain of yours working and your fingers stroking the keys. Think I should check out the local gym?

Cheers

Sage

RavenmillerRavenmilleralmost 4 years agoAuthor

Dear Sage, I’m so glad you liked my horny workout partners! As for checking out your local gym, let’s just say I have 3 gym memberships. No joke. They can come in handy.

Anyway you might want to check out Big Gulp and Between Roommates. They’re older, but in my opinion still fun.

Enjoy your weekend,

Raven

HungBigBenHungBigBenalmost 4 years ago

Ms. Raven...I really liked this story. I can relate to a lot of this story from some past experiences. And yes...sex...when done best...is Primal. Thank you again for sharing so much with a great story line...and I look forward to reading the next chapters. My best to you...and I too have two gym memberships...but I can only go in the middle of the night/before and after shift workers come and go...to avoid the crowds and the problems and notoriety.

RavenmillerRavenmilleralmost 4 years agoAuthor

Dear Ben, Yes! Sex is great when it's primal...and animalistic, raw, manic... But it's also great when it's tender and loving (like in my Cougar and the Anaconda story). I hope I convey all of that in my writing. Thank you so much for supporting my writing. -Raven

dottie86dottie86over 3 years ago
one of the BEST I've read

Superbly written and SEXY as hell!

RavenmillerRavenmillerover 3 years agoAuthor

Dear dottie86, thank you for the lovely compliment. I'm very flattered and glad you enjoyed it. Thanks also for supporting my writing.

Sincerely,

Raven

rbell42rbell42about 3 years ago

Loved the story, and the style.

I would love to hear more about Lan. She could get involved with others from the gym.

andiethexxfanandiethexxfanover 2 years ago

This story is worth expanding on - thanks for a great hot read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Stories about cheaters kind of kills any other groove for me.

mizzouguy88mizzouguy8828 days ago

Wonderfully sexy. Love how she loses her inhibitions over time. A part two would be tremendous, either incorporating more Lan and Mark or Seth and his wife.

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