by joan658
Absolutely Brilliant. Please keep writing.
can,t wait for part two this had me on the edge of my seat
Love your writing!
Great work with a sci-fi twist! I was intrigued with how far the protagonist was willing to go.
Good plot. This one needs a sequel. Please continue writing.
Very sexy story love the hot lesbian sex. Keep them coming girl and keep us guys and gals cumming too
You made me wet
Sexy-Comedy