All Comments on 'Gypsy Rhapsody'

by kellieklein

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Stupid and very badly written.

And there's nothing Scottish about it. Clearly the writer knows nothing about Scotland - and I've lived here all my life. None of the names are Scots. The geography is all wrong - the highlands are nowhere near the English border.

Write about what you know. Or better still, stop trying to write.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Best story I have read on here ever. Ever. It tops any romantic novel I've read in my life sine it was an absolutely perfect blend of sex and story. Keep writing please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

You can write, the idea of your story is interesting. I'm sorry, but this story is so full of unrelated bits and pieces and there is no flow whatsoever

evebroughtanaxthistimeevebroughtanaxthistimeabout 8 years ago

Made me horny as hell. Thanx for the history lesson. Strange spot to put it though. Was still welcome. There are more questions, but who cares - can't think when horny.

LadyintheStreetsLadyintheStreetsover 7 years ago
Can there please be more?

I've read and reread this story and loved it every single time. Please write more!

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