by HeartShapedAss
You have me absolutely hooked on this story. Please continue it.
Your story has grown lovely and tempting with this second chapter. The twists and turns that are starting to show will lead to a very fun read. Thank you and please continue
I love romantic works centering on Hades/Persephone. But if you want the romance formula to work, please refrain from using crude terms like "cock, cunt, cum, fuck," and exclude descriptions of acts of fellatio and sodomy when writing the love scenes, otherwise it won't work out at all.
Again, I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Don't disappoint. ; )