by BigDonGStone
Genius! What a great first chapter. I loved it and will definitely look for the next chapter. Well done!
As a Potter fan I creased up.The game as they say is afoot, 7 volumes X 20 chapters I look forward to laughing a lot.
Loved it. So so funny ,but you need to do the whole series
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. I wish it had been longer, but since it's a novella I assume there shall be more... can't wait to see what happens when Petter and Jinny get together