All Comments on 'Halala of My Virgin Cousin 07'

This has run its course. Maybe you should really study English as a language before coming back here? Or just stick to the vernacular language you are good at?

I'm not sure why people are attacking you for not having perfect grammar. Obviously it isn't your mother tongue, but how many of those people are multi-lingual and have perfect grammar in another language? Some people can be really immature. I'd encourage you to write more stories in English. I enjoyed reading your work. Good job.