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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Love it

Love the built-up, the story so far is intriguing...

Edhawk64Edhawk64about 4 years ago
Well done

Good story, please keep it going

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 4 years ago

A landmark moment in every boy's life, to be remembered and celebrated, "My dad bought me a king size bed when I passed 6" last year." Most wait a lifetime and never achieve it, 6 inches, congrstulations.

No1holywoodNo1holywoodalmost 4 years ago
Time to add another chapter.

Just make a good length chapter please

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