All Comments on 'Hallelujah Ch. 08'
by SirThopas
- 13 Comments
Anonymousover 13 years agovery good story. Like your style and how you paint the emotions. Chapters may be a bit longer, but that's probably just me. I like to read stories in one go and hate having to wait for the next chapter. Or should I say, I like to read interesting stories in one go. Yours certainly qualifies for that in my mind. Thanks.
Anonymousover 13 years agowas hoping he'd offer some sagely advice, seemed to have seen alot of life
incestor007over 13 years agoI dont mind happy or sad ending as long as it is ending, dont leave anything on others, I know you like others to play with your stories, but they will just ruin it, they have have same talent, or atleast similar or close to write something like that, and I dont know anyone on lit who can do that.
thnx for updates
hikewithapackover 13 years agoReally has me one the edge of my seat. Love the tension. Love the characters in all their strength and weakness. Keep it up.
Anonymousover 13 years agothere are not so many admirerer of fine work, they are mostly old fart, they dont have time for fine work, all time they have is is to read about ex, their wife being fucked, and then take revenge, other than that they know nothing, you are good, very few people can understand , the real work, thnx
KILLER
Harryin VAalmost 13 years agoamnazingly well written but god I hope this idiot jake fails
Anonymousabout 12 years agoOpus Dei much sicko? How is that 'whipping yourself with a cat-o-nine tails' thing going for you?
Drbeamer3333over 10 years agoFive stars. I'm really feeling sorry for this guy. I'm waiting for the turn.
Pappy7over 6 years agoSuch a good treatise on maturing and finding your niche. He is about to become wise. Good chapter, really enjoying this story.
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