All Comments on 'Hallie Halloween 01'

when writing a storry, keep the narration legible, only use acronyms like 'OMG' or 'LOL' unless 4a character is saying or it's part of a message being read out like a character, otherwise you just come across as a poor writer

Middleton huh? 😉

Like the concept and, having now read a previous comment, I agree.

Your narrative is ideal, save for the insertions breaking the flow.

Derek should maybe go as The Penguin, the baggy pants would give him a chance to maintain a composed outward appearance.

Middleton huh? 😉

This story is hot hot hot , I love the ideas!