All Comments on 'Hallon Seed Day 03-04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I enjoyed. It

Yes, a bit strange.

But a decent read.

kelprimekelprimeover 6 years ago
Not what I would have done

Good "ending" and all. But not where I was hoping it would go.

Will she age? And die? What then will happen to the demon?

I was actually thinking that Marc and Julia have a kid and the demon go into the kid and be their kid. That's just me though.

dpa44nxadpa44nxaover 6 years ago
This deserves More

I really enjoyed this but I think it needs another chapter to say what happens between them all as time passes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Lame

That's it? What a waste.

Crazy14716Crazy1471610 months ago

please can you continue this series as it might get into a great sequel further. its quite interesting at every part of the story.

Crazy14716Crazy1471610 months ago

please can you continue this series as it might get into a great sequel further. its quite interesting at every part of the story.

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