All Comments on 'Halloween, Aka: Tour De Force'

I liked it.

I think for the sake of us all, you ought to learn a little more about English before you submit more stories.

Badly written. Shitty story. Grats. You fail at everything

i liked the part about him shoppin and the vedio tapyin cuz he can learn from it

I enjoyed it. Everything is spelled correctly, the story has a nice flow. I noticed a few sentence structure problems, nothing serious. I would have loved if it had been slightly more in depth. Perhaps, an extended ending would have done it some good (it feels like it stops suddenly). All in all, it's a decent story.

-J. Mc.