by belted and teased
Some women just can't help being catty! The witch paid it forward just enough so as to ensure her future benefit.
Oh lord, that ending!!! Amazing, wicked, really didn't see that coming, but very good indeed :)
An incredibly creative foray into erotic fantasy and magical love. And damn well written, too!
More please!
MLJ
Very clever !
I gave this 5 stars for the ending, even though there was a tag that foreshadowed his change at the end as well as her change when they met... which I found amusing.
Nicely done !
The creativity in the plot makes this story lovable. Something quite classic runs through this tale.