All Comments on 'Halloween Party SnapChat Revenge'

Very good story but I wanted more. You did a fine job.

Thanks for the feedback I appreciate it! Glad you enjoyed it :)

very enjoyable read, maybe next year you could write another story finishing the night. "My only complaint is you kind of left us hanging"

Not great but good. A five, barely.

One particular thing, Liz was seen sucking his dixk but later Kelly gets blamed for it. Too drunk to remember huh.

Sorry guys! must have missed that "kat" , "Kelly" error!

I was in a rush to get the story in on time! shouldn't have rushed! :(

silly spelling mistakes also!