All Comments on 'Halloween Pics'

Please continue. This is so hot!!

I look forward to the next chapter.

Very hot! Please continue to chapter two!!

Great story. I hope you write a follow up story to this one & keep up the good work.

Use of the word mum and not carrying a continuous story

WHY did you kill the story right at the end??? 2 stars

The ending sucked

Yes, a very HOT story and the fact that Mom now has observed her horny, hung son for hours at the neighbors adult halloween costuime party is great. Her son obviously has a big cock and enough interest to get the job done. If he plays his cards right he4 can have his Mom whenever she is in the mood. Hopefully, Mom will wait until Dad is away on work business and then screw her hot, hung son hard and often. It would be great to teach him all the things she's learned so the son will be an expert make out guy and know how to leave women well fucked and wanting more; including his Mom. Cannot wait for more and let the tutoring continue; thank you !

I just don't get it. Why do these anon readers feel they have the right to condemn a story and boast about giving poor votes. One guy did not like the use of the word "Mum". Why not? I have always called my mother "Mum". And to score so low for the single word. Sheesh.

I wrote somewhere in the area of 8000 words on this story. No comments about the 7990 good words? Just about ten that he or she did not like.

It's also not right that anon users feel they can make stupid comments without the writer having any recourse. They don't have the ability to write stories of their own or even to leave a name. Horrible.

Having said all that, I have received good, solid responses from anon readers as well. I have read suggestions and comments from some great anon readers. For them I am truly thankful. And, as well, I am truly thankful for the comments and suggestions from my named readers as well.

WHAT A BUILD UP, TO A SHITTY ENDING,

YOU GOT 5***** FOR THE STORY. BUT YOU

ONLY GET 2** FOR THE ENDING,WHAT A

LET DOWN.

...THANKS????...

Chapter 2 is being written now and will be submitted soon. Thanks for the feedback.

While the ending was a little abrupt, your promise of the follow up finds me waiting in anticipation. The plot moved along steadily and allows several opportunities to present themselves in the future. Good work, please keep writing.

Loved this story. Give us the next chapter with son taking pics of mom riding his cock and teaching him to eat her. Fantastic

I enjoy the tease and anticipation. Keep the story line going, it's great. Sharing the pictures with other party goers may prove provocative.

Fun story!

10/10!!!!!

Oh I absolutely love mommy's in stockings. Great story. I hope you write more. Especially in stockings and maybe seamless pantyhose. 5 stars

Wonderful, thank you

UK? - Since Ricky seems to be an ass bandit I hope this isn't going to be an anal story - "Does my baby want his mummy to put his beautiful cock in her mouth?" Christ. What puerile vernacular - A very lame ending . . . .