All Comments on 'A Halloween Prisoner'

This isn't really a lesbian story, is it? Okay, so Jennifer gets a bit turned on by being chained up but that doesn't make her a lesbian. A more suitable category might be BDSM or perhaps fetish---time for a rethink perhaps. And near the beginning you describe Jennifer as having "...slender brown hair..." Hair is neither slender nor fat, it's just hair. A shame about these odd points because otherwise it's an amusing little tale.

Hope the intense lesbian action starts with chapter 2......

Yes, category should be BDSM or Fetish - apologies, this was by accident.

There goes 5 minutes of my life I'll never get back. This is terrible. You really should delete it so you don't waste anyone else's time.

I like the way you are building this story. Love to see where it goes. You need a better editor though, sometimes really bad.

This is a wonderful set up for what may happen throughout the evening. I do hope you continue to build on the story.

Very much enjoyed the setup, looking forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing your stories.

Perfect! I was afraid the mugshots would just be a waste of time, but instead they will be relevant to the plot!

The "Wanted" flyers are a great idea.

Personally, I don't like ping pong paddles, but it's adorable that Allison hung something "to use" on Jennifer. Maybe you could add a "use me" sticker on the handle, to encourage anyone who might bump into her while trying to escape.

I hope such a talented Author can publish something for the Halloween 2022 Contest!

Till now so good 👍 looking for more suspense and surprise in upcoming episode