by sex4u4647
Most people like stories that at least have some semblance of realism. This had none.
Please, for the love of all that is holy, use an editor. I couldn't make it more than a few paragraphs before giving up.
Thanks for the story mate, Helen and I loved it, and it has given us a few ideas for a party!!!
Hot, very HOT story just the thing I like to read you have out done your self this time ,you old fart