All Comments on 'Halloween: Through My Window'

Very enjoyable and well written.

I hope you will part 2 to this story.

"Son, why is your room always so cold whenever we get home? You're not leaving the window open, are you?"

"Uh, no dad."

Quite liked it, thanks

"Whoo hoo Witchy Woman, she's got the moon in her eyes"

Nice all Hallows Eve story. Fun time of the year for Witches, and Goblins. Maybe part two detailing the battle, and His future as a little stronger. That would be Fun.

I dunno. It'd be nice to find out more - but leaving things mysterious makes a good ending.

Poor young man is going to be very confused if he ever goes to see Wicked.

At first, I thought she had a deal with the family, The way she asks about his older brother. And the way you left it open of more chapter.

I can see you spinning this to a multipart story. Very cool. Thank you.

Beautiful

Good (if unusual) story. Thanks for sharing. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️