by taiyakisoba
I really enjoyed this story. Your monsters are always well fleshed out and distinctive in their actions. I just wish your stories were longer.
Love you stories. I look forward to seeing you the next one you share with us. Thanks
This is by far the scariest story I have ever read. Why is this Not in the HORROR section!?
I liked the ending as the best part of the story. Hopefully there will be more to follow.
Well, they certainly took over *his* world... but I don't imagine he's going to be complaining...
Honestly could do without the "senpai" bit but damn that was some hot stuff.
This is the first story by you that I have read and I look I forward to more
Lovely story. I did find what I think to be an error
"That was it. I plunged once more into Em, bottoming out deep inside her"
For plot purposes this should read
"That was it. I plunged once more into Ana , bottoming out deep inside her" Otherwise there would not be three little girls in the story :)
Love your stories, you are one of my favorite authors in fact
Any new stories planned?
I love the passages:
"Uh," I uhhed.
"Mmphr," I mmphred.
11/10 Bags of Dollar Store candy!!!!!
I really loved this story except for some of the language used. Mainly the vidya and anon stuff/refusal to just make up a name. Just took me out of the story, and reminded me too much of online meme culture. Otherwise like I said, wonderful story and a 5 star.