All Comments on 'Halloween Triple-Threat'

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Blinkie99Blinkie99over 3 years ago

I really enjoyed this story. Your monsters are always well fleshed out and distinctive in their actions. I just wish your stories were longer.

Happywifrhappylife8586Happywifrhappylife8586over 3 years ago

Please make this a series. Would love to see more

ender2k2kender2k2kover 3 years ago
Loved this.

Love you stories. I look forward to seeing you the next one you share with us. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
THE HORROR

This is by far the scariest story I have ever read. Why is this Not in the HORROR section!?

DreamDiverDreamDiverover 3 years ago
The return of the king!

So fucking glad you're back!

Messy112Messy112over 3 years ago
One word

Lovely.... could have a series with there adventure's family

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I liked the ending as the best part of the story. Hopefully there will be more to follow.

AmbivalenceAmbivalenceover 3 years ago

Well, they certainly took over *his* world... but I don't imagine he's going to be complaining...

KennyCumBucketsKennyCumBucketsover 3 years ago

Honestly could do without the "senpai" bit but damn that was some hot stuff.

Hero_of_MilkHero_of_Milkover 3 years ago
Great story

Very wholesome, you continue to never disappoint

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

You never disappoint

mac1729mac1729over 3 years ago
Great Story

This is the first story by you that I have read and I look I forward to more

bhojobhojoover 3 years ago

Lovely story. I did find what I think to be an error

"That was it. I plunged once more into Em, bottoming out deep inside her"

For plot purposes this should read

"That was it. I plunged once more into Ana , bottoming out deep inside her" Otherwise there would not be three little girls in the story :)

CHTechIndustriesCHTechIndustriesalmost 3 years ago

Love your stories, you are one of my favorite authors in fact

Any new stories planned?

CHTechIndustriesCHTechIndustriesalmost 3 years ago

I love all your stories, any more planned? Just wondering!

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 2 years ago

Cute, fun, romantic, and sexy!

SatyrDickSatyrDickalmost 2 years ago

I love the passages:

"Uh," I uhhed.

"Mmphr," I mmphred.

11/10 Bags of Dollar Store candy!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

this ending is adorable

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Strange but lovely story.

Spar1995Spar199524 days ago

I really loved this story except for some of the language used. Mainly the vidya and anon stuff/refusal to just make up a name. Just took me out of the story, and reminded me too much of online meme culture. Otherwise like I said, wonderful story and a 5 star.

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Back in the game writing monstergirl, fantasy and sci-fi stories. My favourite themes are gentle femdom (think valiant female knights rescuing young men in distress!), yuri (Japanese-style romanticised lesbian fiction) and older-woman, younger-man relationships. I hope you enj...