All Comments on 'Halloween Whore Ch. 01'

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arzurimaidenarzurimaidenover 6 years ago

Good plot with a lot of potential but the writing itself is a little bit dull and not as exciting. Looking forward to the next chapter though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More.

I would love to hear about mia being forced to watch Jade's video while she's forced to reenact what's on screen.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
more

more please, soon, please

more gang time, too, with more and rough use

show the video and expand by gifting her to another frat for the next yearFE31

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Rapists

Crossed the line

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Make part 2!!

Petitioning the author to write part 2!!! I keep coming back to this story and it's just as amazing to read as the first time, but I wanna know what happens to Mia! What was so disgusting about Jade's video?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Ch. 02

We need chapter 2!!

Wendywants2BtakenWendywants2Btakenover 1 year ago

Sooo freaking HOT! I would love to be a frats little whore! At their beckon call to fuck whoever wanted me that day❤️❤️❤️

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

THIS WAS AN EVIL STORY!! IT WAS GOING SO GOOD .. UNTIL THAT GANG BANG.

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