All Comments on 'Halos and Heroes Ch. 11'

Didn’t see that coming. No kidding he has a past!

I did not see that coming. Great story keep it coming.

Always like to surprise. But Ben had always said he doesn't judge...) Thanks for reading!

Can’t even express how much I am loving this story. I’m so invested in these characters. Your character development is off the charts and I am anxiously awaiting more. Please update soon!

Great story so far. Interesting characters and you write well. Keep the chapters coming!

The chapters are all in, They're just being posted as quickly as they can be. The LE people get sooo many submissions a day so they do their best. It's also so long., I'm sure it takes time and at least the anticipation is building! But if you're curious about the rest, just message me.

Thanks for the feedback, and I hope you continue to find it worth the read!

This author has a great sense of what people say and the difference between what they say and what they mean.

In real life anyway. This is mostly introspective like stories in 1st person normally are which some people hate, so I always worry about not having pages and pages of dialogue one behind the other. Thanks for the support! I hope you continue to find it worth the read.