All Comments on 'Halsbury High'

Great Start. Please Don't Do A Gangbang That Shit Is So Boring. Mister Longshaft Need Have A Harem To Himself. Lots Young Women To Go Around...

cant agree with the previous comment more. Stay away from multiple guys it gets boring.

Please get an editor, or at least TRY to proofread it. While the storyline was OK, the execution was pretty feeble. The constant changes of tense, and the crap spelling of too many words, meant that I had had enough well before halfway.

It sounds like this was written by a white guy trying to sound like a black guy.

I enjoyed the story. No need for the N word in the beginning, guess you just wanted to get away with using it

I learned the students something about poetry? I am out.