All Comments on 'Handjob on the Commuter Train'

Really good when she was in control. Less so when she lost it. Needs another chapter to explain it all.

Very well written with some thought behind it. You really need a chapter 2 to clean up some loose ends, so to say. Hopefully there will not be a long interval between this and another.

This is a gem of a story: in equal parts clever, funny, somewhat disturbing but crazily hot. I loved it, maybe your best story yet. Keep writing, you have obvious talent.

Not your typical Literotica story at all, this is oozing intelligence and dark wit - a fabulous example of the art.

Loved all your stories. You have a gift! your stories have an undercurrent of viciousness that is very erotic. Thanks for sharing and keep writing, I am looking forward to your next.

Looking forward to reading more of your stuff. Great story, great build up.