All Comments on 'Hands & Lips'

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AmandaSilverAmandaSilveralmost 14 years ago
Great story

It's a great story and I love the way it flows, kind of smooth and dreamy like the pot. I think the last sentence is too abrupt an ending. I think it could be more like coming down from the buzz.

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