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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I get to be first!

Top notch story, man. Your name makes me think of another--

My last boyfriend told me how much he hated bi guys. He kept talking about how he thought they were all just "feigning homosexuality" and how he couldn't believe he actually went for a guy like me this time. He was gorgeous, but stupid.

Thanks for helping me prove that he's full of shit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great story

really nice blend of description, erotiscism and emotion. It's much better to have some feeling in it than reading a wham bam story. Just makes it so much sexier. Plus I like the professionalism of the main character.. gonna check out your other stories now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I love your stories

I came across your most recent story accidentally and loved it so I'm now in the process of reading all your other stories. I love them. I love the mixture of romance and sex. So much more realistic than some of the usual unrealistic stuff on here. I'm female and straight but I've gotten so aroused reading your stories. I'm adding your name to my favorite authors list.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
great stuff

I really enjoyed your story, thank you.

Makes me want a massage now though :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
WOW!!!!!

Wow, you are a great writer. I love this story. It was the perfect balance of romance and erotica. I love the integrity of your character.

keep up the good work! :)

wordofvirtuewordofvirtueover 17 years ago
Fantastic!

Not only is this story well-written, it's hot. I'll be looking for more of your work!

wordofvirtuewordofvirtueover 17 years ago
Fantastic!

Not only is this story well-written, it's hot. I'll be looking for more of your work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Grrrrr-eat!!

Wow! I might be female, and I might be a virgin, but I LOVE men with men stories. This is so well written, probably the best I've read on here, and I fell so in love with Trey! Perfect balance of romance, teasing, erotica and humour! Please write more.

Lady_BlackhawkLady_Blackhawkabout 17 years ago
Excellent!!!

This has to be one of the best stories I've read in a long time. You write so well. I love the mix of eroticism and romance. You are a fantastic story teller. You are definitely on my favorites list.

Lady_Blackhawk ^.^

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
wow wow whacky!

Wow...just wow. This story got me so hot, particularly while imagining that instead of Jeff it was my sexy boss and instead of Trey, it was me. I also loved the way you didnt spend half the story describing these characters physically like some of the other authors here, it left more to the imagination and allowed the characters to develop their own personalities rather mere play things.

well done, matey.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
awwwww

i love it! the sex was great, the plot was excellent and creative, the characters were fully developed. keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Fantastic!

That may have been the most erotic thing I've ever read! Not only did you make me love these guys naked, but you made me love them clothed too, and that says alot. You're very talented. Keep up the good work! ~Alaana Fair

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
HOT!

That was one hot-well-written story.

It was great. I liked the story, the characters were hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Well done

Wow, tat was incredible.......please , please do write more of those things.

pixir32178pixir32178about 16 years ago
wow hot with ethics :)

Given that I'm a massage therapsit too, I loved the fact that your massage therapist had ethics (didn't have sex with a client) and still you managed to make a really hot story. It's in my favs

theycallmecyclonetheycallmecyclonealmost 16 years ago
marry me?

i loved this one especially because it hopped around guys so much- it wasn't predictable, yet at the same time you knew what you wanted was inevitably going to happen. i like that the characters were well developed, yet left open to interpretation. i love all of you stories! (i still have one or two more to go though) -cyclone

BabyCasBabyCasabout 15 years ago
Loved it!

After reading this story and all of the other ones i really wish you would write some new ones. Your writing is wonderful! Keep up the good work.

KatBalluKatBalluover 14 years ago
Straight girl loves your sexy romantic story

Loved the romance, the honesty and the realism! Plus it was one hot sexy story. Keep up the writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Fabulous

What a fantastic story, so descriptive,so horny, so lovely - looking forward to reading more of your stories - I think its one of the sexiest things when guys kiss each other. Good luck and keep writing - Thank you!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
so hot!!!

wow, that was the hottest story i've read so far!!!

uchenauchenaabout 13 years ago
LOVED IT

I really loved this story. ;-) Not much else I can say.

Looking forward to reading more. :-)

Happy Writing !

billytimebillytimealmost 13 years ago
wow

One hot,sexy story. My dick is hard from reading this. this was a great story with a happy ending

TopBitchKTopBitchKalmost 13 years ago
DAMN GOOD STORY

Good things to happen when you wait. LOVE IT! :)

l8blooml8bloomover 12 years ago
::melt::

The human struggle over the right thing to do ... so much more satisfying than instant gratification. Well done, author.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
HOLY FUCK

Too hot for words.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great!

I have loved every one of your stories so far--my one and only complaint is fairly petty, you seem to use "you're" instead of "your" a few times each story. (If it helps, just mentally read the sentence and replace "you're" with "you are" and see if it sounds right.)

Anyway, I love how long you take to develop your characters and plot--so many stories just dive right in to the hot and sweaty scenes, and while those stories have their place, it is always a great joy to find an author that takes great care with setting the stage. Keep up the great work!

juliusambercrombiejuliusambercrombieabout 12 years ago
Am I bad?

Great story. Well-told, hot, sexy, romantic. And sent all the blood to my dick!

So, I got a massage earlier this week, but not with my regular therapist. Instead, I had to go with a new, young guy. Naughty me, I couldn't resist pushing the boundaries a bit, brushing back against him whenever he was close enough for me to do so. "Trey" would NOT have approved! Nothing happened, but it certainly gave me some more fantasies to consider.

TimothyMTimothyMalmost 12 years ago

After my third or fourth read of this megahot story I just wanted to add my bit to all the well deserved comments. For me the best part is that they both enjoy giving and receiving (I'm not really keen on the terms top and bottom), and of course that moral behaviour was actually rewarded. Your other stories are great, too.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Fantastic....

Absolutely one of the best pieces of writing I've seen in years, if not the best!!! And at 64, I've been reading for a very long time!!!

Characters were all believable and nuanced; dialogue was spot on and the descriptions so well developed that I was constantly shifting to keep comfortable.

I am so reading the rest of your cannon... Another Bi Guy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
sexual perfection

as the story rolled along I had to strip with it and my climax was as good as theirs as I carresed my own shaft in front of the mirror to get the full sensation of the story

jonathanlovescockjonathanlovescockalmost 12 years ago

good story enjoyed the read. thanks.?

nuckin1futsnixnuckin1futsnixover 11 years ago
aww

woot woot one of the best i enjoyed it immensely loved it from beginning to end

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Christ..

I stroked and fingered myself till I could cum no more. I'm panting like a horndog...Christ I've had a massage tht culd get me hard like that before. Good read ; )

sweetallissweetallisabout 11 years ago

Love the buildup and the fact that he initially says no, even better that they get one and other in the end. GREAT work!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Excellent

I am so horny and wet now going to make me cum right now !!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Fuck yeah

I come back to this story again and again. It's hot, romantic and perfect. Fuck.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Love romantic stories about nice people.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
mesmerized

It is such a lovely story..... Unlike the ones I usually come across.. !! It was a reflection of Pure love and Desire.... Salute to the writer...he has expressed the emotions really well..... It feels so wonderful to have a partner who just does not want to sleep with you but wanna do all what you have ever dreamt for.. But sad part is that we never come across such people in our life.... !!!!

But keeping it aside... I would say that it was a beautiful story...

MoonlightSkyMoonlightSkyover 10 years ago
Simply Amazing

I loved it, so sweet and delightful to read!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Very well-written, both for the characterisation and the details of the romance, not to mention the details of the massage therapy. I liked your characters and despite being female and straight, was drawn into the story through the honesty of Trey and his feelings, rather than the titillation value of voyeuring gay sex. Really nice work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

great story about two sweet guys loving and making love. i so much liked the combination of honest feeling and very intense sex. made me hard and wet and happy. thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great read -- and re-read!

I loved this story the first time I read it, and I loved it just as much after re-reading it. I usually don't re-read anything, but this story is different. Is there any fantasy button you don't push? The only way Jeff could be better is if he played piano and spoke French! Time to read your other stories -- you're talented. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A truly beautiful story

It may all be romantic idealism, but this story is so beautifully told and nicely paced. It is written with knowledge, wisdom and a true touch of emotion. It is wonderfully erotic and sublimely satisfying. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

I would love to have my hot penis very extremely deep inside a very hot sexy guy's body and ejaculating some 10 billion hot sperm per thrust for at least 2 hours at my very deepest depths inside him and get him very heavily pregnant with hundreds of sets of sextuplets! During such very intense hot and sexy lovemaking, I would love to taste our very powerful combined hot powerful natural breaths from his mouth while we very heavily French kiss and breathe very heavily into each other's mouths with his hot and sexy legs very tightly wrapped around my waist with his ankles tightly locked and feel his very tightening inner-wall contractions around my very heavily pulsating and throbbing hot penis then to eventually feel my hot penis very rapidly drowning in my own thick hot white warm semen even until I could feel my entire penis rod submerged in my own hot semen as I continue to ejaculate some 10 billion hot sperm per thrust at the deepest depths of my penis inside him with intent of heavily overflowing him as I continue to very heavily ejaculate extremely very deep inside of him for a couple minutes before rapidly slowing my thrusts and ejaculations only to completely withdraw my hot penis from his hot body some 10 minutes later!!! Just want to make sure he gets pregnant!!! At least pregnant with hundreds of trillions upon hundreds of trillions of my hot sperm, very most especially very extremely deep inside of him!!!! Then to have such lovemaking with him again and again plus have such lovemaking with all other hot and sexy guys who would equally enjoy such hot and sexy lovemaking!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
we still need happy endings

excellent, always uplifting to read a story or watch a film where the ending's a happy one

wolfmoon30wolfmoon30almost 8 years ago
Love it

I myself went to college to become a massage therapists. I have bad test anxiety and tests are evil. So I wasn't able to get my license but I agree with everything you wrote. Please add more to the story.

gayswallowergayswalloweralmost 8 years ago
Hands on.

I love man hands on me so much. You make want it so much.

CuriousPeteCuriousPetealmost 8 years ago
LOVED IT!!

What a great story. Romantic, hot sex - just perfect. Just stumbled on it from the "random" list and so glad. But so sad to see you posted it so long ago. If you are still out there, please write some more. You are definitely talented.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Nicely written

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Excellent

I'm not really into anal sex at all, somehow it turns me off. I'm more of an oral guy. But this story was superbly written and held my interest all the way through because it's so well written, intelligent, tastefully conceived, and satisfying in the integrity of the two men. Very good writing skills, too; I saw only two or three errors in spelling or grammar...that's because I'm detail-oriented and was a proofreader for part of my working life. I appreciate good writing by someone who cares enough to do it well.

SweetoverflowSweetoverflowover 7 years ago
Loved it..!

Another one of the beat stroies in here.. It was hot romantic sensual grew with each passing moment not to sloy but just enough.

Totally loved it..!

gayswallowergayswallowerover 7 years ago
Love it

God what a sexy story. Good loving is hard to come by.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
So f#%*ing hot.

Awesome story. Wish I was younger and single. Would love to find a lifemate that way. But...alas. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Lovely story

Nice writing, almost a definition of how attraction works. Well done and thank you

Gary

tlcbitlcbiover 6 years ago
Wow

I enjoyed reading this story immensely.

tjdhall2tjdhall2over 5 years ago
Hands on Love

I always enjoy coming back and reading this story. It's a great story with just enough and everyone their boundries, sticks to their business.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very Touching Story... So Good!

I just came across these wonderful stories again after reading The Yule Log over a year or so ago. I'm not sure why I didn't read the other stories, as I loved that one immensely!

I wish there were many more to read and something more recent posted. All of these stories are so well written, with just the right amount of angst, and sex to balance them out.

Sometimes having to wait for what we want helps us to appreciate it all so much more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Beautiful!

Beautiful story. Sexy. Erotic. Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

great story but who pays 95 dollara for a massage

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Such a lovely read!!!

I loved both your characters so much. Trey and Jeff were both perfect with just the right amount of teasing. And oh, the tension between them was palpable right from the first massage. What really made me fall in love with the story is how they were straight with each other right from the beginning about their attraction and yet Trey stayed true to his work. And God!!! When they did get together..... So hot and worth the wait. The sex was so believable and realistic for a first time between two experienced men. Especially how they were both versatile and cared much more about pleasuring each other than any power dynamic stuff or any top bottom labels. And the massage fantasies. Absolutely loved that. Shit I almost lost my mind when Trey continued on with the massage even after the first round. So delicious especially when he continued on to ride Jeff. And the little love confessions in the end just made everything extra special.

HartlesslyHartlesslyover 3 years ago

Very good story, well written.

jaybearjaybearabout 2 years ago

I enjoy reading love stories. This one is number one for me!

Thank you for your time and effort.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This is a superb story - good storyline, great characterisation and crisp dialoge.

The standard of writing is highly professional and makes for a truly satisfying read.

Thank you artisticbiguy for creating and sharing this story.

Calico75Calico7511 months ago

Excellent story! So well written. One of my favorites!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I really love this story! This is the second time i read it. It's beautiful! Thanks🥰

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Such a lovely story, very well-written and impossible to put down. Parts of it echo my situation right now and it's a real encouragement to move forward. Thank you for posting it.

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