by artisticbiguy
Such a lovely story, very well-written and impossible to put down. Parts of it echo my situation right now and it's a real encouragement to move forward. Thank you for posting it.
I really love this story! This is the second time i read it. It's beautiful! Thanks🥰
This is a superb story - good storyline, great characterisation and crisp dialoge.
The standard of writing is highly professional and makes for a truly satisfying read.
Thank you artisticbiguy for creating and sharing this story.
I enjoy reading love stories. This one is number one for me!
Thank you for your time and effort.
I loved both your characters so much. Trey and Jeff were both perfect with just the right amount of teasing. And oh, the tension between them was palpable right from the first massage. What really made me fall in love with the story is how they were straight with each other right from the beginning about their attraction and yet Trey stayed true to his work. And God!!! When they did get together..... So hot and worth the wait. The sex was so believable and realistic for a first time between two experienced men. Especially how they were both versatile and cared much more about pleasuring each other than any power dynamic stuff or any top bottom labels. And the massage fantasies. Absolutely loved that. Shit I almost lost my mind when Trey continued on with the massage even after the first round. So delicious especially when he continued on to ride Jeff. And the little love confessions in the end just made everything extra special.
I just came across these wonderful stories again after reading The Yule Log over a year or so ago. I'm not sure why I didn't read the other stories, as I loved that one immensely!
I wish there were many more to read and something more recent posted. All of these stories are so well written, with just the right amount of angst, and sex to balance them out.
Sometimes having to wait for what we want helps us to appreciate it all so much more!
I always enjoy coming back and reading this story. It's a great story with just enough and everyone their boundries, sticks to their business.
Nice writing, almost a definition of how attraction works. Well done and thank you
Gary
Awesome story. Wish I was younger and single. Would love to find a lifemate that way. But...alas. Thank you.
Another one of the beat stroies in here.. It was hot romantic sensual grew with each passing moment not to sloy but just enough.
Totally loved it..!
I'm not really into anal sex at all, somehow it turns me off. I'm more of an oral guy. But this story was superbly written and held my interest all the way through because it's so well written, intelligent, tastefully conceived, and satisfying in the integrity of the two men. Very good writing skills, too; I saw only two or three errors in spelling or grammar...that's because I'm detail-oriented and was a proofreader for part of my working life. I appreciate good writing by someone who cares enough to do it well.
What a great story. Romantic, hot sex - just perfect. Just stumbled on it from the "random" list and so glad. But so sad to see you posted it so long ago. If you are still out there, please write some more. You are definitely talented.
I myself went to college to become a massage therapists. I have bad test anxiety and tests are evil. So I wasn't able to get my license but I agree with everything you wrote. Please add more to the story.
excellent, always uplifting to read a story or watch a film where the ending's a happy one
I would love to have my hot penis very extremely deep inside a very hot sexy guy's body and ejaculating some 10 billion hot sperm per thrust for at least 2 hours at my very deepest depths inside him and get him very heavily pregnant with hundreds of sets of sextuplets! During such very intense hot and sexy lovemaking, I would love to taste our very powerful combined hot powerful natural breaths from his mouth while we very heavily French kiss and breathe very heavily into each other's mouths with his hot and sexy legs very tightly wrapped around my waist with his ankles tightly locked and feel his very tightening inner-wall contractions around my very heavily pulsating and throbbing hot penis then to eventually feel my hot penis very rapidly drowning in my own thick hot white warm semen even until I could feel my entire penis rod submerged in my own hot semen as I continue to ejaculate some 10 billion hot sperm per thrust at the deepest depths of my penis inside him with intent of heavily overflowing him as I continue to very heavily ejaculate extremely very deep inside of him for a couple minutes before rapidly slowing my thrusts and ejaculations only to completely withdraw my hot penis from his hot body some 10 minutes later!!! Just want to make sure he gets pregnant!!! At least pregnant with hundreds of trillions upon hundreds of trillions of my hot sperm, very most especially very extremely deep inside of him!!!! Then to have such lovemaking with him again and again plus have such lovemaking with all other hot and sexy guys who would equally enjoy such hot and sexy lovemaking!!!!
It may all be romantic idealism, but this story is so beautifully told and nicely paced. It is written with knowledge, wisdom and a true touch of emotion. It is wonderfully erotic and sublimely satisfying. Thank you
I loved this story the first time I read it, and I loved it just as much after re-reading it. I usually don't re-read anything, but this story is different. Is there any fantasy button you don't push? The only way Jeff could be better is if he played piano and spoke French! Time to read your other stories -- you're talented. Thanks for sharing.
great story about two sweet guys loving and making love. i so much liked the combination of honest feeling and very intense sex. made me hard and wet and happy. thank you!
Very well-written, both for the characterisation and the details of the romance, not to mention the details of the massage therapy. I liked your characters and despite being female and straight, was drawn into the story through the honesty of Trey and his feelings, rather than the titillation value of voyeuring gay sex. Really nice work!
It is such a lovely story..... Unlike the ones I usually come across.. !! It was a reflection of Pure love and Desire.... Salute to the writer...he has expressed the emotions really well..... It feels so wonderful to have a partner who just does not want to sleep with you but wanna do all what you have ever dreamt for.. But sad part is that we never come across such people in our life.... !!!!
But keeping it aside... I would say that it was a beautiful story...
I come back to this story again and again. It's hot, romantic and perfect. Fuck.
Love the buildup and the fact that he initially says no, even better that they get one and other in the end. GREAT work!!!
I stroked and fingered myself till I could cum no more. I'm panting like a horndog...Christ I've had a massage tht culd get me hard like that before. Good read ; )
woot woot one of the best i enjoyed it immensely loved it from beginning to end
as the story rolled along I had to strip with it and my climax was as good as theirs as I carresed my own shaft in front of the mirror to get the full sensation of the story
Absolutely one of the best pieces of writing I've seen in years, if not the best!!! And at 64, I've been reading for a very long time!!!
Characters were all believable and nuanced; dialogue was spot on and the descriptions so well developed that I was constantly shifting to keep comfortable.
I am so reading the rest of your cannon... Another Bi Guy
After my third or fourth read of this megahot story I just wanted to add my bit to all the well deserved comments. For me the best part is that they both enjoy giving and receiving (I'm not really keen on the terms top and bottom), and of course that moral behaviour was actually rewarded. Your other stories are great, too.
Great story. Well-told, hot, sexy, romantic. And sent all the blood to my dick!
So, I got a massage earlier this week, but not with my regular therapist. Instead, I had to go with a new, young guy. Naughty me, I couldn't resist pushing the boundaries a bit, brushing back against him whenever he was close enough for me to do so. "Trey" would NOT have approved! Nothing happened, but it certainly gave me some more fantasies to consider.
I have loved every one of your stories so far--my one and only complaint is fairly petty, you seem to use "you're" instead of "your" a few times each story. (If it helps, just mentally read the sentence and replace "you're" with "you are" and see if it sounds right.)
Anyway, I love how long you take to develop your characters and plot--so many stories just dive right in to the hot and sweaty scenes, and while those stories have their place, it is always a great joy to find an author that takes great care with setting the stage. Keep up the great work!
The human struggle over the right thing to do ... so much more satisfying than instant gratification. Well done, author.
One hot,sexy story. My dick is hard from reading this. this was a great story with a happy ending
I really loved this story. ;-) Not much else I can say.
Looking forward to reading more. :-)
Happy Writing !
What a fantastic story, so descriptive,so horny, so lovely - looking forward to reading more of your stories - I think its one of the sexiest things when guys kiss each other. Good luck and keep writing - Thank you!!
Loved the romance, the honesty and the realism! Plus it was one hot sexy story. Keep up the writing.
After reading this story and all of the other ones i really wish you would write some new ones. Your writing is wonderful! Keep up the good work.
i loved this one especially because it hopped around guys so much- it wasn't predictable, yet at the same time you knew what you wanted was inevitably going to happen. i like that the characters were well developed, yet left open to interpretation. i love all of you stories! (i still have one or two more to go though) -cyclone
Given that I'm a massage therapsit too, I loved the fact that your massage therapist had ethics (didn't have sex with a client) and still you managed to make a really hot story. It's in my favs
Wow, tat was incredible.......please , please do write more of those things.
That was one hot-well-written story.
It was great. I liked the story, the characters were hot.
That may have been the most erotic thing I've ever read! Not only did you make me love these guys naked, but you made me love them clothed too, and that says alot. You're very talented. Keep up the good work! ~Alaana Fair
i love it! the sex was great, the plot was excellent and creative, the characters were fully developed. keep writing!
Wow...just wow. This story got me so hot, particularly while imagining that instead of Jeff it was my sexy boss and instead of Trey, it was me. I also loved the way you didnt spend half the story describing these characters physically like some of the other authors here, it left more to the imagination and allowed the characters to develop their own personalities rather mere play things.
well done, matey.
This has to be one of the best stories I've read in a long time. You write so well. I love the mix of eroticism and romance. You are a fantastic story teller. You are definitely on my favorites list.
Lady_Blackhawk ^.^
Wow! I might be female, and I might be a virgin, but I LOVE men with men stories. This is so well written, probably the best I've read on here, and I fell so in love with Trey! Perfect balance of romance, teasing, erotica and humour! Please write more.
Not only is this story well-written, it's hot. I'll be looking for more of your work!
Not only is this story well-written, it's hot. I'll be looking for more of your work!
Wow, you are a great writer. I love this story. It was the perfect balance of romance and erotica. I love the integrity of your character.
keep up the good work! :)
I really enjoyed your story, thank you.
Makes me want a massage now though :)
I came across your most recent story accidentally and loved it so I'm now in the process of reading all your other stories. I love them. I love the mixture of romance and sex. So much more realistic than some of the usual unrealistic stuff on here. I'm female and straight but I've gotten so aroused reading your stories. I'm adding your name to my favorite authors list.
really nice blend of description, erotiscism and emotion. It's much better to have some feeling in it than reading a wham bam story. Just makes it so much sexier. Plus I like the professionalism of the main character.. gonna check out your other stories now.
Top notch story, man. Your name makes me think of another--
My last boyfriend told me how much he hated bi guys. He kept talking about how he thought they were all just "feigning homosexuality" and how he couldn't believe he actually went for a guy like me this time. He was gorgeous, but stupid.
Thanks for helping me prove that he's full of shit.