All Comments on 'Hands On My Body'

Like it was written just for me - all my favorite kinks. Thank you!

Gotta have the sequel here!

OUTSTANDING story and well written with good character development. Ready for more from this couple and their adventures in sharing. Cheers

Great story! Thanks for sharing it with us. Cheers. Frankie

Awesome story! I was hoping she would wear stockings under that little black dress. Please continue!

PART 2 ALREADY PLEASE!!!!

Another classic. Tremendously paced. One edit? Grace's panties came off in the hotel restaurant then were somehow back on in the elevator.

Great character development. I like the way both characters write in the first person about what they're experiencing.

Great story, but did you forget she took the thing off in the bathroom at the restaurant and gave them to you before you left?

Best story I've read in awhile, definitely 5 stars. Just 1 negative I almost hate to comment on. In the restaurant Jack sent Gracie to the restroom to remove and give him her panties. The story then goes on to mention her only wearing them in his room several times. Aside from that, I loved it all and look forward to the contract signing.

Fantastic story!

But what kind of magic trick occurred to have the thong she removed and gave him suddenly reappear on her body only a quarter of a page later? What a feat of legerdemain!

Can’t wait for next episodes.

Outstanding story. Looking forward to the next installment. I do question how she could remove the thong during dinner and have him remove it again in his room?

I hereby declare you King of Literotica. Well done as always.

(I wouldn't sweat the thong comments, though I wish Literotica made it easier to edit)

Good premise.

Nice back story.

Nice buildup.

But sex is too automatic. Too rushed.

Four stars.

Solid, arousing story, with room for a great deal more in for the future.

There's room for a story or two from Jack, as he shares his back story. And obviously, there is a set up for the meeting with the mayor and his lovey trophy wife.

Only clinker in my mind is that a professional pitching to politicians is NOT going to go too far in celebrating immediately after the deal. Way too likely to morph into scandal.

Yummy!!!

Perfect is all aspects. Keep writing.