All Comments on 'Handyman'

I could read anymore after 3 or 4 “holly” shit or fuck instead of holy. It just became too humorous and yes spelling and grammar errors take away from the value please check them

My apologies for the spelling errors, my proofreader is too busy on her own project to look at my work. My dyslexia is a definite problem and until recently I wouldn't have even attempted to write. I will try to find a proofreader for my next efforts. I hope you can forgive my error.

I see your apologies below for the spelling and grammar errors, so I won't heap more criticisms on you.

Just remember, commas make the difference between "Let's eat, Gramma!" And "Let's eat Gramma!" Of course with this story, the later may apply! Lol

But other than those errors, it was a fun, fast paced story!

Keep at it ;->

Yarnspinnerr

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