by Dash91830
An interesting story, full of potential for character development in all four of the principals. I want to read more.
I’m surprised with the response that Mika said, I suspect her to be supportive to him since she is his girlfriend, I suspect that she did have problems with drugs within her family if she reacted like that(if that’s the case). Near the end is predictable because Stacy is in love with Hank now, but even so, I wished the pacing was much slower so we can get some character development.
One I wished you do is to write a separate story with Mika, mostly because I want other characters own story and their own love life. It’s better then dumping them after each story, I wish Mika would have someone if it’s not Hank.
- Dillon.
Nobody is as perfect as Hank, he must have some downside to him other than his dorkiness, some secret or bad habit, maybe hes clingy or has a bad sense of humor.
I think it's a great story. Your characterization of Hank I think hits the nail on the head.. someone as shy and introverted as he is is fodder for the assholes out there. Please keep going. 5stars