by qm2x1798
Great story! Please continue this tale. It has so many possibilities.
Or if not this series, something else, but please keep writing!
The story was good but that last phrase the wife utters about eating... put it over the top. Wow.
I liked this story until Andy became a dipshit when Emma confronted him and all of a sudden he did not know what to say. He could have just explained it and that would have ended any problems for him. But no, he became an imbecile about it. Of course not doing it that way you could not have had the ending you had.
So, I gave it a 4 instead of a 5.