by Hneedsitbad
Get an editor and learn to use spell check and proof read your stories before posting. Here is but one goof "snuggled" the corrected one is "snugled".
I liked the story -- be sure to let the previous correspondent know that "snugled" is not considered a word in any but the most comprehensive of dictionaries. "Snuggled" is (and was) totally correct in the context used in this story.
I liked your stories so much I didn't notice the typos that someone felt the need to comment on.
I was disappointed that I have to wait for the next one. Keep them coming.
I would give your stories four or more stars due to the content (the names and content are particularly perfect for me to share your stories with one of my playmates). I just wish the errors weren't there constantly pulling me out of the moment.