All Comments on 'Happy 18th Birthday, Cherie'

Utterly atrocious. You should never write about things you don’t know anything about. And clearly you know nothing about sex

He started penetrating her while she slept without her consent, most people would call that rape

Dress Cherie in sheer lingerie. Sheer bra, satin garter belt, sheer stockings and heels she keeps on. Have talk dirty all the way through and then beg for Daddy's cum on her face. After all she is a dirty fuck slut. Hope you'll fulfill a request.

"Utterly atrocious. You should never write about things you don’t know anything about. And clearly you know nothing about sex".

This sums up this story and its writer perfectly. The story is an absolute pile of juvenile garbage; hickies, squirting, WTF.

Thats not the last she'll have dads fat cock in her young cunt

This story sucks. Why would you write about someone’s dad forcing his daughter to have sex?

Didn't like the way is started. Too much like Rape. Stopped reading. Sorry.

I'm laughing so much on these comments like it's tagged incest, you are responsible for clicking on it knowing it's taboo and after reading it, wrote comment "How could you write something like that" You guys shouldn't open it before.

Ignore these stupid comments author I loved every part of it. Hope you will make a part 2 of it

So good! I’m thinking it would be great to spit-roast her. I’d fuck her from behind while my friend would fuck her mouth. We would coordinate our fucking and try to cum in her at the same time. She’d love receiving warm cum flooding her pussy and mouth simultaneously.

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