All Comments on 'Happy Anniversary'

by Cheekyoz

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theVikingSailortheVikingSailorabout 5 years ago
Well done...

Really nicely told story. Thanks for sharing it.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Good story

That was a good little, no cheating, story.

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 11 years ago
Romance

TLW is not THAT adventuresome. It is sweet and hot.

Interesting that she gets 'desert' but when he returns the favor, it becomes 'dessert!' Maybe kinda like 'fiancé' and 'fiancée'? Maybe not!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Belongs in Romance

not LW. Very good description of her capacity to be a slut though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Spelling and grammar

This is a nice little story.

If you write in Word and use spelling and grammar check, it would catch many of those errors. You did a common spelling error when they had "desert" (an arid type of geography, when you meant (I'm sure) dessert (a treat after a meal).

Not to be too critical but it detracts from you story.

Best regards,

TornadoTysTornadoTysabout 11 years ago
Good Story

I enjoyed reading this little tale.

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