All Comments on 'Happy Birthday'

A lot better scenario would have been if the party had gotten a little more wild, and as a finale, his cock and balls were cut off. A man with a small cock like that deserves more than humiliation. He deserves to be snuffed.

Society would breathe a sigh of accomplishment and relief, if they had done this to the pathetic piece of shit.

If he complained to the authorities, the police would laugh at him. They might have even given them all medals for good citizenship. How about another chapter where they make him a girl, and then as the story ends, they slit his throat. In the shower of course, so they don't ruin the carpet. Then throw him in the trash for Monday morning's trash collection. A man with a cock such as this deserves to die.

TO HURT OTHER PEOPLE FEELING IS REAL EASY FOR SOME PEOPLE,BUT FROM THE WIFE YOU NEED TO CHANGE FROM THAT WOMAN.WHY WOULD STAY WITH A WOMAN THAT HAS NO RESPECT FOR YOU.IT WASN'T FUN AND 9MM WOULD BEEN A GOOD LAUGH IN THE ASS.

Even for the genre this had no redeeming value.

Do people enjoy this kind of stuff? Man, I read it by mistake and it sickened me. Please tell me that in real life there are no marriages like this one. Why would she stay with him? Why in the world would he stay with her? Why would anyone write such drivel? Please, Glenda100, find some other hobby. Or put a major league disclaimer at the top of your stories: PREPARE TO PUKE

Sad,

I get the jest of the story and the author did a good job writting it but why....... this just went way overboard ith is sure was not erotic. Hurting people in not very sexy its just sad. Karen calls herself a wife and they have been married for how long? theirs no love anywhere with this couple and those arn't his friends

I enjoy NonConsent stories immensely but this one was just sick. There was absolutely no arousing quality to it. The main event was to humiliate and hurt the husband. I get the impression that some guy has really pissed you off, Glenda, and you're trying to get back at him.

The whole thing was sick and to say that a man is worthless because his penis is too small, is just plain stupid.

Oh, and before any of you idiots make a stupid comment, I'm female and found the degradation of the husband repulsive.

to the person who wrote the previous comment about cutting his balls and cock off, im very sure you are a cold blooded cunt who has done that in one way or another. to the story itself, pointless, not erotic, not entertaining, just nogt anything!

you weren't going to finish it? The man obviously had some pride, which the entire gathering roistered to rip from him. What did he do to restore his pride? Surely you don't believe a man has none except where his sex is concernted.

It could go with a divorce (almost certain at this time) to his wrecking havoc on each one of his tormentors. Including his spiteful, vicious sister. So many ways to do it, and so many people to do it on! And you didn't have the imagination to write about it.

A few grammar things and I wondered about the use of "crutch" instead of "crotch", not sure if it was a typo or a UK usage. Anything that can churn up the people like this has got something working for it. Good one.

jim : )

In the nonreluctance/nonconsent category the authors write about women made to drink urine, called slut, tramp, whore, bitch, gang raped, double penetrated, made to lick every sort of bodily fluid off their partner and themselves no matter which orifice it came out of, drink out of toilettes?and the comments for such stories are:

HOT! HOT! Good story! MORE! MORE! MORE!

Think about it?

Now, this story, the guy is ?humiliated? because of the size of his dick. That?s it! And the author gets over twenty negative comments.

Where are the HOT! HOT! Good story! MORE! MORE! MORE!

Think about it?.

Congratulations! The most disgusting, sickening story I've read recently. I quit half way through it because I was afraid I might throw up. I hope the author has seriously considered psychiatric help, because normal people male or female, do not enjoy humiliating other people , especially spouses that you at one time must have lloved, or maybe you never did love the poor sap. You have my sympathy. 60 year old George

My God, that's nasty. It's like some of Edgar Allan Poe's stories, and that's a compliment -- it's bloody brilliant.

well done literotica for removing the first comment on this story. it was writen by a stupid idiot.

there is no room for comments like that.

as to the story people can take it or leave it, nobody died or had to go to hospital.

Glenda, what a story!

I agree with Throubador - this isn't the end. The man, even as you describe him is not a wimp - he has not accepted any of his treatment or enjoyed it.

I would be very careful after he gets free, unles they kill him first. He has a lot of so called 'friends' and a former wife who has never loved him to get even with - and he will.

ALSO to anon below, literotica does not delete comments from this area - the author does.

He humiliated his teenage sister in the shower, and later sent her to "Coventry", so it was appropriate that he be taught a lesson on his birthday. Okay, he feels sorry now, but she had years of stress over it. If he is genuinely sorry, then he will make up with his sister; too bad he will get ribbed a lot from the other guys at his party; and his wife will cuckold him for sure in the future as his penis is only big enough to tickle her, now she has tried a bigger size.

This story is garbage. This is repulsive, sick and twisted. I mean... does anyone in the WORLD actually think this is okay?

This is half a story. The husband has been the strong one, the one in charge, and then his wife takes over and humiliates him and cheats on him. Are we supposed to believe that he just accepted that? Eventually somebody had to untie him, what happened then?

this is a very well-written story (with typos, but hey, this is literotica..) I think it's funny that people find this so disgusting- it's in the nonconsent section, so obviously something drastic is gonna happen.

Personally, I enjoyed it, although it did make me feel sorry for the guy...

Stories where adults act like drugged out pre-teens are too unbelievable to be taken seriously.At least attempt to portray some character development and background rational or don't bother.This would more properly be located in erotic horror.It is simply the recounting of a perverse nightmare.On the right track towards twisted humiliation but too simple and juvenile.I'm seriously intrigued at the thought of penning the revenge chapter though.What fun could be had!!!Pistolpackinliberalpete

it was hot though

I would be divorcing the wife and beating my sister, or just beat both and leave to never return

And the revenge should be colder. The divorce is a forgone conclusion. But since they've taken pictures, those are the first things to get, by whatever means necessary, including force. They will simply help in the civil lawsuits to be filed against ex-friends and family. Collect the money, ruin as many lives as possible and retire to a nice, warm, sandy beach. I'm not sure some of them would make it to the hospital, maybe straight to the morgue.

My wife of 10 years arranged a birthday surprise for me.

As the party was ending my wife's friend and her partner along with there 18 year old son stayed back. We were all pretty drunk and played stop poker which I was the first to be naked to which brought amusement to everyone seeing my little cock on display. My wife's friend dawn offered her partners services to my wife saying that she needs to feel a real mans cock. My wife actually took up that offer there and then kneeling down in front of him taking out his huge cock and sucking it. Her son demanded I did the same same to him which dawn agreed with so being drunk and seeing my wife I did. I was so engrossed his cock I didn't she my wife being taken up stairs by dawn and her partner. It was not until I heard her familiar crus of pleasure I realised I was alone with him(john) on hearing my wife john says you know that you have lost your wife to my mam and her partner but it's kk as you can now belong to me. Then he pulled me up by my hair spat in my mouth then pushed me over the sofa. He then proceeded to force his cock up my virgin arse and was fucking me. It hurt all the time he was doing it however he reached under me and started to wank my little cock. After a while he gripped me hard and came inside then carried on wanking me until I came.

We then heard coughing as we looked up we saw my wife , his mum and her partner watching. My wife said to me was that as nice as what I have just had I just smiled

Me too

That was soooo hot I just had to jerk my little cock until it cum

Great story you should write mor I would def read

What a bunch of cuckie wimps! The comical part of it is you all seem proud of it...oh well...what's that saying...oh yes...no sense no brains!!!

bizarre...