All Comments on 'Happy Birthday'

I hope this is the first of many and it turns into a HEA.

Love your story I actually have two stepsisters I grew up with and know first hand what torture it can be for a teenage boy going through puberty. Never did have the pleasure on acting on any of my fantasies. It is fun to read stories of those who have, nice job!

Adult and erotic where both parties are pleasured and satisfied. I like a happy ending to a story.

Can someone say rape

More brothers should be as considerate. Clearly she wanted and needed a good fucking, perceptive of him to oblige her!

Let me get this straight.

He was 24, and lusting after a NINE YEAR OLD???

Can you say PEDOPHILE!! SICK!!

Sorry, your story didn't turn me on. And believe me I like stories about hard to get, But raping someone so much younger, and in her sleep. How much more fun if she had awakened and said "Oh big Brother, you sure are 'big' today"

By the way, don't your characters know how to talk?

i have to agree with everyone else. while this story has the makings of a good read, it is over the top. '' as tears were streaming down her face" really resonated with me."dont fight me i am going to fuck you" says one thing.....RAPE

The story was fine, they're not really brother and sister, the sick part waz wanting her when she was 9

This is a great story. For all of you complaining about the rape, do you know what non consensual means? It means they don't want it.

Don't get discouraged by the loud minority who love to read non-consent stories then feel guilty later

She was 14 not 9 when he started lusting after her

She was 9 when they first met and he found her attractive then...him 24 her 9. That's 18 minus 9 yrs Second time her 14 him 29 . Rapes her at 18 him 33. Too gross even for this site.

I love your work and come back to your page, like a voyeur, seeking their sweet embrace. Keep writing, keep posting, I'll keep reading.

This was perfectly raw and non-corny.....one of my favorites ever. Don’t worry about these people who feel guilty or like to pic on non-con stories because of their own hang ups. This story was DELICIOUS. (And this is coming from a 20 year old girl!!!) more,

Please!

Can’t wait for the next chapter

I wish there was dirty talk