by SidiWadia
I really hope this is the first in a series now, nice pace and very much enjoyed
Guess you can take your fat cousin and turn him into a hot sex machine. Have fun exploring your character.
More fun than Imagined.
Enjoyed your portrayal of immediacy and tension that, apparently, your cousin did not share.
A couple of either typos or spelling errors that should have been discovered in Proof Reading.
"Anon, about 1 year ago
I'll pass
I hate gay anal in these stories!!!"
I beg to differ, there was NO GAY ANAL in this story. What happened is Joey shoved his prick in the wrong hole. It happens, not often, but still...
By the way, this is a FIVE STAR story (*****!)