All Comments on 'Happy Birthday to Me'

What an inspiring story... Crazy fun and brilliantly visual. More please.

First. this was a really great story! I loved the vivid sex. The other reader has a point about spelling and grammar, but it didn't spoil anything for me. Keep writing!

It seemed like it was more about the gals' fantasies and pleasure than Frank. Sure, he got off, but in a very limited & controlled way.

(you need an editor, or at least a proofreader - the typos are distracting)