All Comments on 'Happy Father's Day'

by Honeyloving

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Trust and love will take you to ecstacy

The trust and love they have for each other drives the whole fantastic story. Her decision to share her self flows from their mutual desire and absolute trust. A powerful, passionate and extremely arousing story. 25 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Wow! Love, trust, lust & passion!

Well done! We need more like this, with couples keeping it hot between them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
For his birthday...

She should peg him.

HoneylovingHoneylovingalmost 5 years agoAuthor
Happy Birthday

Thanks for the kind feedback!

The next story, Happy Birthday, is in the works, and one commenter has guessed well about what might happen next!

Intimate_ThoughtsIntimate_Thoughtsalmost 5 years ago
enjoyable & just realistic enough

loved this story cant wait for more, really like how it feels real

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Good story

Fun and hotttttt

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Looking forward to the sequel.

Not to rush you but..... please.

70slowhands70slowhands5 months ago

I'm sorry I never read this a long time ago. Very hot and erotic. A definite 5 stars 🌟

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