All Comments on 'Happy Holidays'

For a first this was arousing and with a neat twist at the end.

Short and to the point, a great first story. The end was brilliant.

This story is written in such a beautiful way, with lovely description, especial when she describes how most of her clothing ended up in tatters. But it felt written from the heart. And after looking at the author's profile picture I read it again with her face in mind the whole time.Well done.

I really liked this story. The only part I didn't like was Kit undressing so quickly for Morris - not very realistic nor does it fit with the rest of the story. The twist at the end was great and you gave a great description of the sex scene.

Great job! I really enjoyed this! Keep up the wonderful work.

Great job! I really enjoyed this! Keep up the wonderful work.