All Comments on 'Hard Hike with Uncle Mike Ch. 02 - On the Sum'

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Thomas_LodgeThomas_Lodgeover 2 years ago

Again, I am very impressed with the good writing.

English is not my native language and I would hope to be able to write that well some day.

The story line is great and the erotic scenes very arousing.

Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Excellent story. More please.

Ciaoquebec2Ciaoquebec2over 2 years ago

Excellent story. The descriptive imagery conveyed the setting of the story so vividly that I felt the forest around me.

The action and words of the characters were extremely erotic and also enabled me to read diferentiate between each character. Very realistic! I felt as if I was there myself!

Thank You and Hope to see more from you.

Jean (John)

DustyDevilDustyDevilover 2 years ago

This has the makings of a good story so far.

DustyDevilDustyDevilover 2 years ago

I hope that you can further develop this story.

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See my submissions: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=6083942&page=submissions Improving my writing is an ongoing goal of mine. I'm no English major, nor a gifted writer. I can take criticism. It is especially helpful when I understand how I can improve. ...

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