by FINLEYDIXON
Again, I am very impressed with the good writing.
English is not my native language and I would hope to be able to write that well some day.
The story line is great and the erotic scenes very arousing.
Great job!
Excellent story. The descriptive imagery conveyed the setting of the story so vividly that I felt the forest around me.
The action and words of the characters were extremely erotic and also enabled me to read diferentiate between each character. Very realistic! I felt as if I was there myself!
Thank You and Hope to see more from you.
Jean (John)