All Comments on 'Hard On the Trail Ch. 10'

by ketup

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aclassyladyaclassyladyover 8 years ago
where do you go from here

This story has been interesting. I thought to stop reading it but, you made me curious as to where you were going to take this story, so I kept reading it. I now want to know where you go from here. You have the 3 main characters all up in the air and I wonder where they are going to be now. Keep writing for I would like to know what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
my heart...

I actually feel sorry for Daddy. Sure, at first he started at nonconsent, but then the story had gotten interesting, things started building out and it's great. I'm one of those people who believes in happy ending in this type of predicament. This mad me sad for Daddy. Please continue writing, I would love to know more of what happens next.

ketupketupover 8 years agoAuthor
More coming

submitted next chapter tonight

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