by secretsxywriter
That was a very arousing story! I loved her obvious attraction to Billy and they both oozed sex.
I didn't read the original version of this story. This version felt balanced to me. Having read a few of your other stories first, I was kind of expecting a twist such as tease and denial or leaving her tied up while he went to do his presentation. Some kind of play on the title, Nowhere to go...
5 stars again.
Thank you for the comments. I've updated the "fight" scene, so hopefully this will be more pleasing to the reader. - H
From skimming, the sex looks great! However, the description of the food and argument are more specific than necessary. It pegs them in too specific a social class (pasta and steamed vegetables? so middle-low america) and makes them hard to relate do, and as a result, I didn't read past 'Billy snapped, "I'm going to get some fast food."'
I loved the story but you probably could have chosen something else for them to fight about. Their argument and her reaction seemed pretty strong even if they had shitty days at work.