All Comments on 'Hardly Ever Here'

Please write a sequel to this delightful story. I really liked so many things about your story: the build-up; the harem potential; the good grammar and spelling (you might be surprised at how many people find those important, even if it's not their #1 thing). [To me, bad grammar and spelling can ruin an otherwise imaginative and good story.]

I hope you have another chapter to this story. I think girl girl with Julie and Amelia would be a start,

No surprise here, chocolate cake goes very well with beer, especially if its from Julie's B day cake. Its good to be a dense man, you never considered Julie could shower at Amelia's. Me either

God were going to love team sports. Now drill those girls in proper balls handeling

...this is the one! You have the basis for at least 3 more to follow this 5 star offering.

With 8 girls on the team, only imagination should limit the chapters, not forgetting the panting mothers.

would like to read more chapters.

This story NEEDS more chapters.

Make the red head next...

Mmmmmmm

Thanks,

FDD

This is a wonderful hot story of an older single man and some young girls craving for an experience with him. Julie has had this crush on him for at least 4 years and her Mom likely knows it. My be dad cause break out of the “conservative” mode and have Nicole join them or better yet have Josh join dad so he can coach and demonstrate with both of the youth. Thank You! And hope there is more to read.

I wasn’t familiar with what the sport of Netball was like since I’m an American so I had to look it up on the Internet. Sounds like a harder game to score & play than Basketball. Thank You for exposing me to something new and different.

Thanks for sharing.

Outstanding story. Very descriptive and erotic. So much potential. I am sad you haven't written any more chapters. I hope you do.

Anyway, thank you!

I "Had" a 18 y/o a few times when I was 42. She came on to me with just enough to get me going. Was glad we did. She was curious about what sex with a man would be like. Said it was great!

I really really hope this amazing story continues. Because he has 7 more girls to go after so he can start and grow his harem!!!

Seriously this is fantastic! Hot but also very well written.

Definitely needs a Part 2!

I definitely agree there needs to be a Part 2!! Loved the story!!

Yeah there really needs to be a part 2 to really explore all the adventures his new girlfriend wants to try. Definitely seems like she's up for a threesome at the very least.

Hell maybe it'll end up as a team sexercise :-)

Another winner.

If only, if only, heavy sigh......

Needs a another ending. But I like the story a lot. AAAAA++++

A better ending would be great. The lurch from a great story to over-the-top sex was sort of a jolt. Seems like Julie's mum might have missed her daughter and come looking for her as well. A more gradual and more believable (a more toned-down Julie than the nymphomaniac as currently portrayed) beginning of their physical relationship would make better sense.

We want the red head, we want the red head

Great story, but where is the next chapter? Looks like there have been a few requests in the other comments! Would love a few chapters!

More please

Damn, I thought you were gonna say he was gay the way he reacted when he found a naked girl on his couch at night. I can’t believe he would’ve argued with her as long as he did before taking out of bed.

Definitely a sexy fun toy story