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ju8streadingju8streadingabout 4 years ago

not what i was expecting.

was hoping for him to get some revenge on those cunts

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
HMMMM

ARE YOU KIDDING ? GET A LIFE.

sp9983sp9983about 4 years ago
Lousy

A lousy story. I had hoped the second page would be better, but I was wrong.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Appaling

Just bad

rdoolittlerdoolittleabout 4 years ago
Not bad.

I saw all the negative comments and have to disagree. Except for the scat, the overpowering and diapering were humlilating and erotic. (4)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Garbage

What an absolute load of crap.....oops!,,, hang on isn't that the name of the story??

Very poorly thought out.

paladin1954paladin1954about 4 years ago

This attempt at a story was literally shitty.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

The word is "shuDDer", not "shuTTer"... Learn basic English!!

SubtextSubtextover 3 years agoAuthor
Typo

You're right... that typo does ruin the story. Damn Yanks!

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