by ravengrave
That took a terrible turn. Loved the start and first few chapters. Too bad the MC turned into a total jerk.
I enjoyed the chapter (just like all the story), but I understand the complaints as there is some dychotomy between the beginning and the end of the story. Maybe you should consider writing a story focused on romantic aspects of incest, and another one about rough sex with dirty talk, inbreeding etc.? (personally I would prefer the latter). That being said, thank you for your writing and don't make us wait too long for your next installment!
Thank you for your comments! I am sorry if I have disappointed some of you, but that it sometimes the way of things, I suppose. I can only write the type of stories I would enjoy reading myself. And I do enjoy reading stories that mix the more romantic aspects of the daddy-daughter relationship with more hardcore aspects. In this series, it was important to me to keep a clear theme of genuine love in the relationships between Daddy and his daughters, not just Daddy carelessly taking advantage. I hope that was evident, even if it was a delicate balance, especially in chapter 5. That being said, I'm not ruling out writing more clear cut stories in the future, of course.
Anyway, I decided to remake the very end of the story - the future harem - into two optional epilogues with different twists. I do hope you enjoy at least one of them and decide that was the future of this family.
No kink shaming intended but I don't find the mixing of multiple contradictory kinds of taboo themes in the same series to be erotic or hot or whatever. Starting off with a loving incestuous story line then swerving out of the blue into some cheap rape fantasy really killed any deep interest. The breeding and fantasy lactation with incest I could live with if the sensuality came off okay but it seemed a bit juvenile and crammed in by the time it happened. I'd rather all these domination and non-consent fetishes be given distinct stories. It seems mainly vulgar in an incest story. Again, not kink-shaming just voting for keeping the hot, sweet and savoury exotic spices in different jars.