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All Comments on 'Harvest Moon on Fe Lanmou Pt. 03'

by mypineapplestories

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Well written. I hope you keep going. If I may make a gentle suggestion... "Slow Burn" openings work better when the story is published with fewer longer chapters. Either way, I look forward to reading more of your work.

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