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"Terry," Mitzi says.
"Ugh?"
Terry has temporarily moved beyond speech.
"Kneel Kelly down again," Mitzi says.
For a moment I think Terry is going to ignore Mitzi, but then feel myself pushed to my knees. Mitzi spends a while kissing me again.
"Pretty girl," she whispers. "I adore you so."
She slips out of the tutu, and slides her white tights down her legs. Then she takes her panties off.
I have never seen Mitzi naked like this before, and am astonished to see she is almost as big as Terry. Genius be buggered, this woman is spoiled. She giggles and touches my hair and face as Terry's thrusts send me towards her, then pull me away.
"Hmmmm..." Mitzi says, almost absent-mindedly.
She grows before me, slides on a condom, puts her hand on my head and slips into my mouth. A new rhythm is quickly established. Powered by lust and everything I have taken, I find a new energy and focus, determined to be a willing, wet and lovely conduit.
And so, with great and tender muscularity, we spend the night like that. We use our implements, our potions and our physical strength to create an intimacy so powerful we seem to break down walls between worlds, finding ourselves bathed in light whose source we love but do not yet understand.
This, then, is how with kindness and deeply erotic understanding, we exorcise the ghost of Emma.
- COMMENTS
Emirusover 3 years agoI don’t read many stories in this category and always read the description first. This description was the only one on the front page that promoted interest but, unfortunately, the story wasn’t what I expected. The way I read the description I was expecting something different.
The first half of the story was very good. I personally loved the humour and thought it was well written. As I was reading I thought “this is a definite 5.” Then I got into the second half and it was as if someone else had taken over the story. If the story had begun like that I would have given up reading. What happened? But the second half was definitely average as far as scoring goes and not even worth a 4 but I’ve given it 4 because of the first half.
At this point I’ll say I’ve never come across a story yet which required semi-colons and this is no exception. I’ve read stories in which a comma or full stop was more suitable and that’s the case here. I thought your dialogue was good but many of the dialogue tags weren’t required. When the reader knows who’s talking they don’t need to be told. I skimmed over the spliff/poppers because I have no knowledge of the subject and it didn’t, for me, add anything to the story. But that’s only my opinion.
I’m sure the first writer is capable of producing a story that’s good all the way through.
Anonymousover 3 years agoI found this to be a uniquely strange story. Some of the vocabulary and phrasing made it slightly confusing at times but I still could not stop reading it. You managed to create some semi warped characters in a weird situation but still made it worth reading and enjoying while still making it hot at times.
I am glad I didn’t miss this one.
