All Comments on 'Haunted Prey Ch. 14'

she either is or turning into Rachel. This was not hard to pick up at all.

Is it just me or is chapter 13 where you always place the catalyst in your stories? Something bad always happens or a hint of more bad to come is giving. I'm on to you Purefire. Keep the stories coming.

I understand why Alexis told her that only death would save her. To bad for him, so sad for her.

Please tell me that racheals soul didnt flow into aluria...ugh this is painfully gooood

Oh crap...so it's not over? I'm just going to wait and see what happens. If Alauria makes it out of this alive, she's going to need a very long vacation.

Rachel took over Alauria's body. She must be thinking of a way to possess her for good. Hope Lindsay realizes soon and that no one else dies! *hint, nudge* Looking forward to next week.

OOhh kay, it seems that Racheal and Alauria are sharing Alauria's body though Racheal seems to want to take it over completely..Does she think Lindsay loves only Alauria's body? She's probably betting that she can get him back even though her first attempt failed.

After Nadia, I hope you're not planning on killing anyone else.

I'm am just along for the ride. This is a very interesting and well written story. Of course, I have a few ideals where you are going but I think I will just sit back and enjoy the story. I love reading everyone's opinion too. Keep it up.

i really don't know what to say i knew that the defeat of Rachael was a little to easy. I have two theories of what its is happening: she is Rachael or tracheal is possessing her.

honestly, I already hate you for what you did to nadia so this won't make me hate you any less.

She cant be Rachel.....Please write soon

I think i know where ur goin with this and i dont believe i am wrong keep up the good work

if your heading where i think you are with this story, you are really cruel but i love it never the less..lol

if i think your heading with this story is correct, you really are cruel but i love it never the less..lol