All Comments on 'Havana Club Ch. 04'

Where have you been Stickland83? You are a wonderful erotic storyteller. We look forward to the next chapter. Thank you for submitting your story to the pages of Literotica, which sorely needs more quality writers.

Well Done - you are a welcome relief. First rate story line, character development, within erotica framework - I could taste the cuban sandwich, the smell of smoke rolling from the Cohiba! Please keep 'em coming!

Your sex is so straightforward and wholesome, I find it very heartwarming (much as I also like kinkier stuff!)

Well done ! You make the characters come alive. I feel the emotions of them both. Can't wait to turn the page (so to speak). Haha

Ah the ' good old days' in bad old Cuba. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.