All Comments on 'Have Faith...'

Nice buildup..I can't wait to see more.

Wow...these is one of the BEST stories ive read here, and i've been here a while. Great characters and rhthym to the story telling. it was so good i had to stop reading it until i could have some time to myself (nudge nudge)

I'm a french man and your storie is beautiful.

I don't wrote English well but I understand completely your writing.

I hope Have Faith 2 and 3 ...

Thanks

What you wrote was a great erotic build-up, but the amount of typos inside of it did detract from the over-all eroticism of the story. Try an editor for your next one.

good story so far. I have two areas of criticism: Needs spell check or a good editor and it seemed to suddenly end.

As previous readers have commented, you need an editor. The use of some words, i.e. weather, is incorrect. It should be whether. This is just one example. Your sentence structure and phraseology needs correction at times. That being said the story is good with good character development. Can't wait to read more.

it is to long i think!

I like this story a lot. Can't wait to start the next chapter.

Well written. Mental illness is certainly hard on families

I have known several hyper-religious women but all of them that I knew still loved to fuck, thank you. Lucky me, I guess. I had to almost divorce my wife for other reasons but things worked out well once I got her away from that damned church (after many years of crap). At least it did not slow her sex drive, LOL. That came many years later, I regret to say. I am 75 and should not worry about it but I have made other arraignments. For the last 15 years. Good story, I hate religious fanatics, especially wives that deny sex to their husband. Bf

The mother is really pissing me off with her hardcore religious crap.

Good start but please get someone to proof read, can this be edited now it is posted?

A FUCKING LITERARY NIGHTMARE! LOAD THIS UP IN A TEXT READER AND LIKE THE FIRST SENTENCE ON THE LAST PARAGRAPH READS AS SUCH,

“Yeah a plan dot dot dot dot I might just have one Cas dot dot dot dot I might just have one.” SUCKS WHEN YOU HAVE TO SPEND 20 MINUTES A CHAPTER EDITING JUST TO BE ABLE TO LOAD IT AND LISTEN INSTEAD OF READING IT! I USUALLY SHY AWAY FROM THESE LITERARY FUCK UPS!

The further I read, tripping over your poor grammar and wrong word choices (not quite malapropisms, by strict definition), it became apparent that you combined elements of similar stories on this site into your rather poor attempt. Were you in my creative writing classes, I would fail you on principle alone. You obviously never learned the difference between to, two and too. Nor did you learn when to properly use than and then. Your typos are off putting and without excuse in today’s day and age of word processing software with spell and grammar check. Overall, two stars because your story was too difficult to read (see how I used two, too and to? That wasn’t too difficult, was it?)